Showing posts with label OUGD403 Studio brief 1. Show all posts
Showing posts with label OUGD403 Studio brief 1. Show all posts

Friday, 18 October 2013

Alphabet soup final crit

Design Skills Studio Brief 1 final crit

Today I presented my first final crit to the group. The feedback i received was positive and has helped me establish what elements to take from this brief into creating a full typeface. As you know my word was symmetry and my typeface Garamond, after the intrim crit I had the idea of splicing an element and mirroring it on an axis point. I played with this idea a little as is shown in my design practice log. But my peers again went back to the 'z' idea they favored in the interim crit. But again they liked the X idea but the same issue came up that legibility would be an issue. The mirror 'i' found at the bottom is a development from its predecessor spliced 'i' positioned above. It was said in the interim crit that the idea of a visible axis point was a nice idea. So i played on this visible mirror point through basic type anatomy, used the baseline as a mirror point and reflected the spliced element either side of this line. This worked well but in terms of body text it was agreed it wouldn't work as a family of letterforms it would work nice as something like a logo though maybe?

 So my initial ideas at the moment is to take this idea and the splice idea with the 'i' letterform and develop these together somehow. I was happy with my feedback obviously but it would have been nice to receive some harsh feedback so to speak so I know were to improve upon next time. One thing that i did learn from the crit is that some people created grid systems for creating there letterforms and I feel this would be a nice way in which to create an accurate system and produce a number of letterforms much faster due to having a production system. 

Below is a snapshot of the produced visuals. 

Thursday, 17 October 2013

Alphabet Soup - Visual Thinking Finals



Design Skills - Alphabet Soup - Visual Thinking Final developments

Presented bellow are my final analogue drawn 10cm x 10cm examples of my visual responses to this brief. I explained there concepts in the previous post but there has been a few changes in these final examples. The first one is emulated in the first example, my initial idea was to create an uppercase out of a lowercase but playing about with this idea i came up with combining 2 spliced elements of separate letters to create a representation of a 'y'. I like this idea but its legibility is the problem. The final example comes from the mirror idea, i liked the idea of splicing a letter up so i spliced up a lower case 'i' squared off the top of the stem to create a more square serif and added bold weight to the element then mirrored the spliced section on a visible baseline mirror point. 

My favorites are the 'Z' and the bold weight 'i' and these are what I will go onto create a full range of letterforms in a digital output. Although I do like the handmade analogue feel of this and the contrast of the black on the recycled grey card is something I like. It sort of contrasts the old with the new, as Garamond is an old style serif font I thought I would use a paper-stock that emulates an old feel to contrast with the bold contemporary drawing style. An element of age needed to come into this due to the typeface been based on a punch cutter  An old style type press machine. 



In terms of use this would work best in a body text to keep legibility good when letterforms are placed next to each other in sequence. As mentioned my favorite elements are how the 'Z' uses an axis point as a stem as well as a visible mirror point, and I love the simplicity of the bold spliced 'i'. Its a very stable letterform due to adding bold weight to the stem and squaring off the top of the stem and the serif isnt as rounded on the brackets. What i would have liked to do tho was take the apeloig inspired 'a' into further development as this isnt like my usual style, its very abstract and fluid in its motion and this is something I will keep in mind for future developments were I see fit. I would also experiment with printing methods more to obtain a more broad range of final outcomes but apart from that Im pleased overall with the completion of my first brief and look forward to digitally manipulating it now. 

In terms of inspiration if you look into the inspiration post I made I soaked up a few concept ideas from this. For example the repeated dots to create the color blocking in the spliced 'i' is inspired by the use of dots in the lego letterpress piece made by Levi Bunyam. The element of splicing and fragmenting arrangments used throughout some of the letterforms in inspired by the sculpture created by Valee Duhamel. Unfortunately i could not use bold colors within the typeface due to legibility issues and how the typeface would work as a body text. Finally the last inspiration piece came from the combination of Apeloig Drops typeface which inspired my abstract 'a' and the whole digital bold feel came from the threesix font i found on typetoken. Along with underlying influences from initial research into Garamond and word association as is all described in previous posts. 



Below are visual responses in terms of trying out new things, I tried out a range of paper stocks to create the old feel i desired. The brown worked well but to me felt too 'crafty' so to speak and a little to hand made which interferes with the crispness needed to emulate my word symmetry. I liked the idea of stippling the color in but again this contradicted the crisp feel I wanted to emulate. The use of different paper stocks was recommended in my crit, the print method i tried out still used fine liner but created a kind of half tone through the use of 'stippling' it was inspired by the legopress letterform in my inspiration research. 

Below are examples of using type weight on my chosen stock for final production. Ranging from light, regular and bold I feel the bold works well and creates a nice contrast through the tonal ranges of the black type on the grey background. 


Tuesday, 15 October 2013

Design Skills - Alphabet Soup - Visual Thinking 2

Design Skills - Alphabet Soup 

After evaluating my rough sketches presented in the previous post I have chose the 10 designs I want to finalise and polish up. My working style works best on constant improvement through different stages bringing in underlying influences in each stage. So the 10 designs you see here will now take influence from some source inspiration i have presented within the design context blog. I will also tie in historical references in a visual way based on Garamond, I feel tying these references in a visual way in with my contemporary type manipulation will create an in interesting concept. 

Idea 1. I got this idea from discussion in a crit, i used an axis point and someone mentioned using the axis point in a different way so as I was using splicing as a word to provide visual response I had a play with using a set axis point to remove sections of a letterform while still maintaining legibility. I like how the serif has been removed from the bottom creating a hybrid sans serif and serif letterform. I have also added weight into the stem.


Idea 2. This was my personal favourite but upon further inspection and crit analysis it is obvious this will only work in letterforms that have 4 main points positioned on right angles to create this square, disassembled concept. So this wouldn't work well only on things like X, T, O, W letters with more structure. I squared off the brackets to create this more angular feel on this and it worked nicely. 


Idea 3. Is what gained the most positive feedback in the crit. It uses a variety of the words I stemmed from symmetry in my mind mapping. These been spice, mirror and axis. The idea as mentioned previous came from Idea 2 which lost legibilty in certain letterforms so a crossbar or diagonal stroke would be left in to maintain legibilty and emulate a mirror on an axis point for the spliced element. An interesting concept that uses a range of words to create a simple visual outcome with a complex meaning. Lots of weight has been added to the mirror point to create a contrast between bold and light which i like. This would work best as a header text but once more are made it may be legible for body text.


Idea 4. Was a brief idea I had using a concept of still motion animation through the 10 slides, this would work in a concept of creating and constructing an element using the words splice, pivot and add from my mind mapping. But in terms of creating a manipulated letterform this concept doesn't fit. As manipulation isn't really explored of terms of anatomy. 


Idea 5. This idea was a quick little play on the words splice and mirror. I spliced parts of lowercase letters to make uppercase but this would only work with letters like. h and g for example that have ascenders and descenders removed and the loop and bottom half of the elements mirrored to create a representation of the uppercase form. As presented here with lowercase h elements creating an uppercase representation. An interesting concept but not very neat and legible which doesn't fit in with the word symmetry that portrays order and form. 


Idea 6. This idea stemmed off from idea 5 using the word mirror, i simply reflected the element along a horizontal axis on the baseline to create something that looks like its reflecting in water, kind of looking at itself in its own reflection along a still body of water or a floor laying mirror. 


Idea 7. This idea was a more subtle approach to the word splice. It creates a more delicate final outcome, splicing an angular section off the stem of the loop, disposing of the counter creating a wide aperture but still maintaining legibility of a p. A very complex and technical concept. 


Idea 8. Here is my first play on pivot and another touch on motion. Using a visible pivot point and moving the letterform around the pivot creating a circular motion. The concept been here that this circular motion contrasts with the word angular which was derived from my word association of symmetry and i basically flipped angular on its head to create a more abstract concept. 


Idea 9. This is probably the most simple visual outcome I arrived at but most effective in terms of visual concept. It has no type manipulation in terms of anatomy just a bolder weight on the stroke. The concept is to add a visual axis point on all the letterforms to emulate a mirror point and axis point in a anatomical way. It also emulates splice quite well, in such a way it shows the line of motion were a splice or cut could be applied. 


Idea 10. My final idea is a complete abstract concept. The word symmetry has been flipped on its head to emulate the word distort in a visual way. So basically this is just a freehand/script representation of Garamond in a fluid motion creating a bold, hippy style abstract letterform. 


From here I will go onto create final presentations of these 10 letterforms in polished up finalised visual response. I will experiment with paper type, letterform weight, size and print methods to create varying outcomes using various mediums. 

Monday, 14 October 2013

Alphabet Soup Interim Crit

Alphabet Soup Interim Crit

Today I had my first group crit, a small group of 12 unique disciplined students to help me spark further ideas and concepts from my current quick sketches. I found this very beneficial and soaked in alot of what was said, not just to me but to other people as it will all prove helpful in the development of my ideas. 

I presented my work forward and received positive feedback on a few elements but the most coming from an 'X' idea that is presented in my design practice blog, people liked this but mentioned how it could be made more legible on other letterforms. This could be done by adding a support element, and after seeing i experimented with an axis on one of my pieces it was said an element should be used as an axis to support the splices elements of certain letterforms. As is shown below in this 'Z'. I will bare in mind peoples advice on experimenting with paper stocks, printing methods and color combinations to portray different visual responses.


This is the second piece of developed work that i really like. Its very clean, simple and legible with an abstract twist. Splicing part of the letter from a set axis (create an axis/grid point for the set or individual axis points to splice off elements). Combining this with other words I have stemmed from could create strong design outcomes.


Main points for me to remember now are: 
Experiment with axis points, line weights, color, size, alignment within the 10cm x 10cm box and printing methods. These will provide to be the main development stages to create 10 different visual responses.

Sunday, 13 October 2013

Alphabet Soup - Visual Thinking

Studio Brief 1 Alphabet Soup


For this brief I am required to produce a set or series of ten letterforms which explore and communicate my interpretation of the word given to me from the randomizer. This been the word symmetry so I will begin to generate ideas and visual responses through experimentation and developments.  

Through use of manipulation and my knowledge of typographic anatomy I will transform my given letterform from the Garamond typeface to create an outcome that emulates symmetry.


To prepare us for the manipulation of typeface we were put into groups to alter a serif font to a sans serif and vice versa. This is shown bellow in the form of the final outcome and rough little thumbnails. In the end to create the sans serif font to serif we added a bracket to the bottom of the stems and a tail at the bottom right stem and the top left stem. For the serif font we experimented with reducing stem height on the bottom section below the cross bar of the 'A' and added a medium line weight. 



Leading on from the group session of experimenting with manipulating type gave me a range of ideas to start playing about with using a selection of words as a basis. These words been; Splice, repeat, mirror and pivot been the ones i played about with the most. Below are examples of some rough ideas I have created. 
I find it easy to thumbnail rough sketches down it helps me to roll out ideas quickly and develop upon them roughly instead of creating finally polished outcomes. Now these quick examples are down you will now start to see things develop stage by stage combining different influences on the way and elements will roll in together to create better final outcomes taking sources from crits, type inspiration and outsources like art and architecture. 

Sheet 1

Sheet 2

Sheet 3
The 2 examples below are quick sketches of visual responses of advice i received from an interim crit. There is an adaptation of an idea i used splitting a letterform up into 4 points to create a squared image representing an X which can be seen on sheet 2 above. Theres also an idea given to me of splicing a letter and presenting one half of the letter in a legible abstract manner. The ideas was to find an axis point and use this as a cut off point to create a typographic response of the word splice derived from mindmaping words for symmetry.


This 'z' is something derived from the 'x' i created, it was agreed upon in the crit that some letters would need a support point to remain legible. So the idea of axis points came back into this to create a much better outcome that has a certain element of support through the use of a diagonal stroke along an axis to create a nice visual response which I will combine with the above concept to arrive at different outcomes. To add to this support i plan on altering serif weights and lengths to see if this provides a more structured letterform that doesn't feel so lost on the 10cm x 10cm piece as I felt this was a problem on some of the rough sketches, so pay attention too the way the negative space that is took up by the positive space as it all makes a difference within its compositions.